#SexySnippets
7 sentences brought to you each Sunday
From WIP MMromance, Falling Star Valentine
Settled in a seat opposite Valentine, Dale’s thoughts
jumbled—hell, he’s so hot. Dale
picked up the menu from its place on the crisp white tablecloth, next to napkin
wrapped cutlery, and overturned drinking glasses that waited for use.
He stared at the list of refreshments. His stomach
churned. Like Valentine, he hadn’t eaten breakfast either, but it wasn’t hunger
that made his stomach clench. He sighed inwardly knowing his level of disquiet
owed everything to how startling attractive Valentine Steel was. Six months of
hankering after Jack flew away as Dale raised his head and caught Valentine
gazing at him with pure desire shining in his sky-blue eyes.
Way to set the scene! I can visualize where he's at and feel his growing anxiety! Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptions here, Elodie. Will they make it through dinner, I wonder? :-)
ReplyDeleteAwesome anticipation. Well done. Have a very happy new year.
ReplyDeleteSitting opposite someone you desire can be unnerving especially when you don't know how they feel.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a promising beginning. Great snippet, Elodie!
ReplyDeleteSexy snippet!!
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